36. Make some revisions on a paper.

Make some revisions on a paper. You should make this paper a bit longer, like one more page. Here are the comments:

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Sample Organization
The introduction:
Open with an interesting quotation, or with a general statement about the concept, or with a surprising fact or with a question.
Briefly describe your concept and then define it in your own way.
Provide background information of the concept. You may use your personal experience.
Write a thesis statement

The body paragraphs:
In each body paragraph, you may use definition, classification, comparison and contrast, narrative process, and cause and effect. In order to help readers understand the information, use specific terms for categories, concrete examples, simile, and/or metaphor. Use also personal experience.

The conclusion:
Reiterate the thesis in different words.
Frame the essay by relating the end to the beginning.
End with a memorable quote.
Follow it thoroughly!