ENG 102 USF Acknowledgment and Appreciation for an Outstanding Essay

hi i need help writing an email for my professor to change my grade and make it higher grade I’ll write here some of the reasons and i need your help to write the others and make it very convincing and logical, 

one of the reasons he he gave me B+ because of absences, at the beginning of the quarter he told us we have 4 absences that we don’t need to explain ourselves to him that’s why I have 8, 3 with excuses and the others not. And one of the reasons I don’t attend is because I live in Rockford since my brother lives there and I rarely take his car and usually take the bus which is a 2 and half hours distance. That’s for the absences for his comment about my final paper, he’s giving me shit cuz someone wrote it here in studypool and it was 0% mistakes that it sound kinda unbelievable, try to convince him that it’s my hard work or something and he should give me a higher grade cuz i wanna get a 4.0 gpa so i can have a better chance keeping my scholarship. I uploaded his comments and the final grade. Please help me write a convincing believable human made email.