Synthesis paper final draft

Hi,
I want you to write the final draft of the synthesis paper. I have the feedback
of the draft one from my professor (in blue colors). Please read them carefully. I need the
introduction of this paper, rather than just the summary (you can see it in the file). The connection is
very important, how can they relate to each other. Please focus on the claim
and connect them. I need a whole completely paper, not bits and pieces. Please help
me to improve it. I have the introduction attached below and three articles. I want the deep analysis (writing styles processes, tone, evidence..) I want you combining multiples sources around a central topic. Thanks~~